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Come to me children, dears
Can't you hear me weep?
Desperate cries pierce the blackest night
Rouse you from contented sleep.

I've yearned so long to hold you,
Wrapped tight in deaths embrace,
I beseech pale, waif like hands
Come, forgive my once foolish mistake.

Sacrificed such delicate innocence
To loves unrequited lure.
For one heartless man I gave it all
So his hand I could secure.

To prove I loved him beyond all things
I cast you to the waters depths
Gave up those I'd held most dear
And pray new love could heal regret.

My sacrifice though did not appease,
Condemned by my own desire.
For my crime I had to repent,
Ignite my own funeral pyre.

But now I search for my lost darlings,
Every long and lonesome night,
Along the banks at the rivers side
Where I'd held you out of sight.

Come back to me please children, dears
My cries are want to lead you home.
Join me at the rivers side
And together let's fall beneath the flow.
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My entry for the literature contest being hosted by :iconliliths-realm:

I've always rather liked the La Llorona legend, the crying woman who drowned her children to earn the love of a man who rejected her. She killed herself but remained on earth forever searching for her lost children. But there are also legends that she would lure any children away into the night so I kind of took that idea and ran with it, she's searching for her own children really to 'take home' but I'm kind of figuring that any children who'll come will do :D
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:iconoviedomedina:
So sad and yet beautiful.
Nice touch giving her a more...humane?/sympathetic point of view.
Faved!
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~Sapient-Butterfly Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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:iconoviedomedina:
No problem!It was my pleasure!
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=paintedbluerose Jan 25, 2011  Student Writer
I can't stop reading this. It has this creepy, eerie feel to it, but such a lovely way. :aww: :love:
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~Sapient-Butterfly Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:iconliquidsunshine6:
oo. i like it. very emotional. i can just imagine La Llorona walking along the river calling to the children. great job!
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~Sapient-Butterfly Aug 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much, and for the fave too :aww:
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:iconladyh70:
Very deep and dark... I do like it tho!
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~Sapient-Butterfly Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) and for the fave too :aww:
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:iconladyh70:
Your welcome!=)
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